Age/Gender: 29, Male
Location: Adelaide, Australia
Job: Government Worker
I AM GOVERNMENT MAN. COME FROM THE GOVERNMENT. THE GOVERNMENT HAS SENT ME.
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I envy people who can make rhyming couplets and they don't sound awkwardish! Your reading could use a little work - but the poem itself is sound! Also, the repeating background SFX was a little distracting - best just to find some sea SFX that can go the full distance rather than something that's on a 5-second loop.
Author's Response:
This was a learning experience for me so constructive criticism is just what I need. Thanks for being honest.
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